01. And It Rains and Rains When Giancarlo visits the Blakes, the family knows a good day is in order. Meanwhile, Markus decides to research more about RPG. READ 02. The Start of Our Lives When a young Rafael misses something in his life, he is determined to find something to fill this void. Meanwhile, Giancarlo and Erika discuss their younger son's feelings. READ 03. Felipe's First Job When Felipe gets his first job in a medical specialty center, he has to deal with various issues that show up during the worktime. Meanwhile, the police chief Howard Jones deals with a crime that is happening in the city. READ 04. Blakes Across Time When his PC breaks out of nowhere, Rafael is sucked by his monitor and ends up meeting his future family. READ 05. Sick Child Blues When Felipe gets feverish, it's up to Rafael to take his kid to the pediatrician. Meanwhile, Beatriz watches a cartoon with Bianca. And, after a humiliating loss, Aiden gets angry at his teammates and causes a huge fight in
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